Question

【题目】书面表达

暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法。请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。内容包括：

缺点：呆在家中花费少，不能亲身了解外界；

优点：外出旅游增长知识，开阔眼界，花费多，旅途不便。

注意：

1.词数100字左右。

2.短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表述。

3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it's both convenient and comfortable. What's more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling. In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于提纲类写作，要点已给出。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.疑问词加动词不定式作介词宾语；They think it's both convenient and comfortable.运用宾语从句；others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. Since引导原因状语从句；it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, it作形式主语动词，不定式作真正的主语，并在句中运用for引导的并列句；另外，What's more, However, In my opinion,为文章增色，使文章显得结构严谨，层次分明，句子衔接自然，语言流畅。