Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处）不计分。

I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner（执业者）. One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course” I reply.” Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they offered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.

Answer 1

1.把in改为on

2.把go改为going

3.把careful改为carefully

4.把in case of去掉of

5.把finished改为finishing

6.把so改为but

7.把reply改为replied

8.把a改为the

9.把they改为you

10.把extremely serious前面加上was

【解析】

1. day I was in the phone…在打电话句式是on the phone。故把in改为on

2. day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment.这里go over the details of an appointment是用作主句的状语，要用现在分词形式，故把go改为going

3. careful wrote down her address…。careful adj. 仔细的，小心的；carefully是careful的副词形式，这里是修饰动词wrote down，要用副词形式。故把careful改为carefully

4. case of去掉of；第三句…and the set time in case of I forgot.。in case of万一，假设，以防，介词短语，后面要接名词或名词性从句。in case万一；假使，是连词，后面连接句子，而句中I forgot是一个主谓结构的简单句，要用in case。故把in case of去掉of

5. were just finished the conversation …，finish 完成，结束。结束对话短语是finish the conversation，而We和finished the conversation是主动关系，故把finished改成finishing

6. hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question。 so， conj. 所以，因此，表示因果关系、承接或递进关系。but conj. 但是，而是，然而，表示转折关系。这句话译为：我希望你不要介意，但是我有一件相当奇怪的问题。故把so改为but

7. course” I reply.从前文可知这里讲述的是一个过去发生的故事，因此，叙述要用过去式。故把reply改为replied

8. said a lady 。the是定冠词，一般用于特指的名词前；a是不定冠词，一般用于泛指。这里是特指跟我打电话的这位女士，故把a改为the

9. was wondering if they offered discounts because I only have one leg.这里是一位女士在电话里跟我提问题，人称应该是“你们”。故把they改为you

10. serious前面加上was；最后一句Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.这个句子前面部分是现在分词短语作状语。而that从句中，缺少谓语，extremely serious是形容词短语，故要有be动词，已知是过去时态，要用was。故把extremely serious前面加上was

考点：考查考点：考查介词，副词，连词，人称，固定短语等一些语法知识。