Question

18．请根据如图写一篇100～200个词的短文．你的短文应包括下列要点：
1．简要描述图画内容；
2．说明图画含义；
3．谈谈你的看法．
TE              AM
There is no"I"in a team．
Don't Be Self-centered in a Class
As is shown in the picture above，       ．

Answer 1

分析 本文为看图作文．写作时注意首先描述图片点明主题，然后分析概述对图片所反映的现象的理解，最后发表感想．写作时时态以一般现在时为主．
重要短语：self-centered（自我为中心的）；put…into…（把…放进…）；break up（打破，解散）；In order to （为了）；cooperate and support 
                  each other（相互合作与支持）；even if （即使，虽然）；care about （担心，关心）；no longer（不再）．
高分句型：1．This picture conveys the message that if team members are self-centered，the team may break up．
                这幅图传送了这样一个信息，那就是如果一个团队的成员是自私的，那么这个团队就会解散．这是一个双重复合句，在这个句子中that引导一个
                 同位语从句，同位语从句中有含有一个条件状语从句．
                
                2．In order to achieve this goal，students should cooperate and support each other even if sometimes someone may have to make sacrifices．
                为了达到这个目标，同学们应该相互合作与支持，即便是有时候有人不得不做出牺牲．这里 even if sometimes someone may have to make    
                sacrifices  是一个让步状语从句．

                3．Only if they work as one can they achieve success．
                只有他们作为一个集体去工作，他们才能成功．这里副词only放在句首，句子用半倒装，故把情态动词can提到主语they的前面．

解答 Don't Be Self-centered in a Class
As is shown in the picture above，a helicopter is going to put the letter"I"into the word"Team"．But if so，the word will no longer exist．This picture conveys the message that if team members are self-centered，the team may break up（高分句型一）．（描述图片）
A class is actually a team．All the students in the class share the same goal---to make the class an excellent team and to help everyone develop fully and healthily．In order to achieve this goal，students should cooperate and support each other even if sometimes someone may have to make sacrifices（高分句型二）．Only if they work as one can they achieve success（高分句型三）．However，if some students are self-centered and only care about themselves the teamwork will surely be negatively affected or even destroyed．I believe，there is no"I"but"we"in a team．（分析图片的语意，然后给出启示）

点评 在写这类作文时，首先要认真分析所给提示信息，整体理解写作要求，然后运用所掌握的英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，并认真看图，围绕主题，发挥想象，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．