Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

3. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last summer I go to Hangzhou with two Americans. I became their guide. First, we went to the West Lake, that is a famous place of interest in Hangzhou. We looked around it by the boat. After that, we went shop. The sellers couldn’t speak English. Though it was very harder, I tried my best to listen their words carefully and translate the sentences. They bought many things with their help. Next, we went to a small zoo but took some pictures. When we felt hungry, we went out and had lunch. After lunch, we visited some old house. All of us had a greatly time that day.

Answer 1

【答案】1. go→ went

2. that→which

3.去掉the

4. shop→shopping 或在shop之前加to

5. harder→ hard

6.在listen 后面加介词to

7. their→my

8. but→and

9. house→houses

10. greatly→great

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了在去年夏天，作者作为导游和两名美国人一起游西湖的过程。

1.考查时态。由Last summer可知时态要用一般过去时，动词要用过去式。故将go改为 went。

2.考查非限制性定语从句的关系代词。句意：首先，我们去了西湖，这是在杭州的一个著名的景点。非限制性定语从句不用that引导，此句先行词是the West Lake，在定语从句中作主语，所以用which引导。故将that改为which。

3. 考查冠词。表示交通工具by boat“乘船”，不用冠词the。 故将冠词the去掉。

4. 考查固定搭配。固定短语go shopping(或go to shop) “购物”。故将shop改为shopping 或在shop之前加to。

5.考查形容词的比较级。句意：虽然很难，但我尽我最大的努力认真听他们的话，并翻译出来。此句语境没有比较之意，无需比较级，且 very不能修饰比较级。故将harder改为 hard。

6.考查固定搭配。listen为不及物动词，跟介词to连用，listen to倾听。故在listen 后面加介词to。

7.考查代词。根据上文Though it was very hard, I tried my best to listen their words carefully and translate the sentences.可知，应该是“在我的帮助下，他们买了很多东西。”故将their改为my。

8.考查连词。句意：接下来，我们去了一个小动物园，还拍了一些照片。went to和took之间是并列关系，此处无转折之意。故将but改为and。

9.考查名词单复数。house 是可数名词，前面有some修饰，所以用其复数形式。故将house改为houses。

10.考查形容词。句意：那天我们都玩得很开心。此处需要一个形容词作定语修饰名词time。故将greatly改为 great。