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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I used to be very close to my father when I was a child. Whenever I quarrel with my mother, I would turn to my father for comfort. As I got old, the gap between us began to grow, that made it hard for me to start a conversation with him. She had done so much for me but I always took for granted. A week ago, my dad gave me the ride home on his bike. I was so tiring that I fell to asleep against his back. Later my mother told me Dad was happy that we had not been so close for a long time. That day, I hugged Dad thankful with tears in my eyes.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】这是一篇记叙文。文中作者讲述了从小到大对父亲感情的变化。

1.考查动词时态。根据时间状语when I was a child可知，是讲述小时候的事，用一般过去时。故quarrel改为quarreled。

2.考查比较级。此处指随着年龄变大，含有和小时候比较的意思，用比较级。故old改为older。

3.考查关系代词。句意：随着年龄的增长，我们之间的代沟开始扩大，这使我很难与他开始交谈。根据逗号和句意可知，句中包含的是非限制性定语从句，用关系代词which引导，不用that。故that改为which。

4.考查代词。上文作者讲述的是和父亲的感情，此处指和父亲的对话。指代父亲用he，故She改为He。

5.考查代词。此处指把父亲为我做的事认为理所当然，指代父亲为我做的事，故took后加it。

6.考查冠词。此处指父亲骑自行车带我回家，ride是可数名词，表示“一次”，故the改为a。

7.考查形容词。tiring意为“累人的，麻烦的”，用来修饰物，tired意为“疲倦的，劳累的”，用来修饰人。此处指我很累用tired，故tiring改为tired。

8.考查动词短语。fall asleep意为“入睡，睡着”，是固定短语，故去掉to。

9.考查连词。此处指父亲高兴是因为我们很久没有这么近了，表示原因，故that改为because。

10.考查副词。此处修饰动词hug用副词，指感激地拥抱父亲，故thankful改为thankfully。