分析 本文主要讲述作者第一次乘飞机的经历．首先，有点紧张，在乘务员的帮助下，作者很快熟悉了环境．后来，被提醒系紧安全带，但最终被证实是一点小事故．
解答 When my parents told me that we will go to Wuhan for holiday by air，I really felt a little nervous．After all，it was my first time ever to take∧plane．We got on the plane after check in．Everything was so very strange to me that I didn't dare to touch anything．But my nervousness didn't last long due to the help of the hostesses．With their patient explanations，I soon got familiar to the environment．Thing went smoothly and I was enjoying the flight when suddenly we were warning to fasten the seat belt for the coming strong air flow．I became scared at the news，but they turned out to be a small incident during the whole journey．The plane soon became steadily and we landed safely at Wuhan Tianhe Airport one hour ago．
详解：
1．will改为would 考查动词时态．在宾语从句中，主句用一般过去时，从句只能用过去的某种时态，根据语境，用过去将来时．
2．加a 考查冠词．"乘飞机"用英语表达是：take a plane．
3．check改为checking 考查动名词．after是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
4．去掉very 考查词语用法．so是副词，very也是副词，是多余的，要去掉．
5．to改为with 考查介词．be familiar with一般是指某人熟悉某人、某物．be familiar to则是某物、某事为某人熟悉．此处应是前者之意．
6．Thing改为Things 考查名词复数．根据句意：一切进展顺利．thing要用复数形式．
7．warning改为warned 考查动词语态．we与warn之间是动宾关系，要用一般过去时的被动语态．
8．they改为it 考查代词．it指代前文的the coming strong air flow．
9．steadily改为steady 考查形容词．become是连系动词，后接形容词作表语．
10．ago改为later 考查副词．根据句意：一小时后我们安全地在武汉天河机场降落．用副词later．
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