Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mark来信说对我国的三亚很感兴趣。请你给他回封邮件，简单介绍以下内容：

1.三亚地处中国海南省南部，因美丽的海滨景色和四季如夏的气候而闻名；

2.三亚已发展成为最受欢迎的国际旅游城市之一，十分宜居；

3.其中著名的景点天涯海角和大东海等吸引了众多海内外游客。

旅游城市 a tourist city 天涯海角 the end of the seas and skies 大东海 Big east sea

要求：词数120左右。

Dear Mark,

_______________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mark,

I am very glad to hear from you.

Sanya is one of the most famous tourist cities in southern Hainan Province of China and it is well-known for its beautiful seaside scenery and warm weather all the year around. In recent years, it has developed into a popular tourist city. The beautiful scenery and warm climate throughout the year make the city a good place to visit. The attractions include Tianyahaijiao (The end of the seas and skies) and Dadonghai (Big east sea).

With all it provides, it attracts a lot of tourists from home and abroad every year. If you want to spend a beach vacation for fun, you will never get disappointed at Sanya.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章主题和内容要点已经给出，但需要考生在写作时，合理发挥想象力，做到有话可说，使文章的表达自然，丰满。

注意以下几点：1.通篇以一般现在时为主。2.写作要点齐全，文章的写作要点要齐全，尤其注意题干中隐藏的信息。本文是写回信，因而注意信件开头应对“英国笔友Mark来信说对我国的三亚很感兴趣”作出简单回应。3.不能简单罗列要点，注意使用恰当的连接词，使行文连贯。4. 注意使用高级词汇和句型，以提高文章的档次。5. 注意字数：120字左右。6.规范誊写，使卷面整洁。

【范文亮点】：

The beautiful scenery and warm climate throughout the year make the city a good place to visit.使用了“make+宾语+宾补”结构，此处宾补由名词短语a good place充当。

With all it provides, it attracts a lot of tourists from home and abroad every year.使用了定语从句，all为先行词，it provides为定语从句，省略了关系代词that。

from home and abroad“海内外”，这一短语是一个亮点。