Question

书面表达（满分25分）
请根据下图提示，用英语写一篇短文。先简要描写下图，然后再发表你自己的看法和意见。

注意：
1．词数：100左右
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3．参考词汇：孤独（寂寞）get lonely

Answer 1

不唯一
It is the old man’s birthday today. Now he is sitting on a sofa alone. Maybe his wife has been dead. On the right side is a big birthday cake sent by his son. And there are also some presents given by his daughter on the left. Yet the old man doesn’t feel happy. Instead, he looks very sad because he is lonely.
Our life is getting better and better than before. Some people think that old people will be satisfied as long as they have enough to eat and drink. I think they are quite wrong. Old people easily get lonely because they have no work to do. So we should spend time together with them and take care of them in every possible way.

试题分析：图画作文是较难的题型之一，因此考生应该特别认真地对待。这类题一般要求考生仔细看图，根据题目要求写成自己的作文。实际上，图画作文也可以当作三段式的提纲作文来写。首先来描述图画并揭示其寓意(寓意一般用一句话来概括就可以)，其次分析原因，最后发表评论或提出建议，面对此类题型，考生应首先确定主题，然后再动笔。尤其要注意图画中人或物(人与物)的体貌表情特征和背景，确定人物之间，人物与背景之间的主要关系，以便正确掌握图画所传达的信息。考生应该展开合理而丰富的联想，用生动恰当的言辞抒发自己对图画的所思、所想、所感。注意图画作文中的文字说明。文字说明非常重要，通常十分清楚地提供一些写作要点，考生在看说明时要看清主、谓、宾，正确理解说明的意义。
点评：根据图画内容的不同采用不同的段落发展方式。如图画式作文写作多要求进行描写图画。对于漫画式写作，漫画描写本身并不重要，但文章的寓意却要力求准确，不要拖泥带水。系统且突出地展开段落。展开段落要根据画面内容进行，最好能围绕每一段的主题句进行。考生要进行检查与修改。考生应重点检查图画内容是否准确地被表达出来，题目所给提示是否完整地反映在文章之中。如果存在与画面不相符的内容，或未能完全涵盖题目所给提示，考生应对文章做出相应修订。
应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感。