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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It was March 8th, Women’s Day. I decided to do something for my mom and give her a surprise.

Immediately after school, I went to the supermarket, when I bought plenty of vegetables, fish and meat. As soon as I arrived home, I started to prepare the dinner for Mom. It was the first time that I had cooked something on my own. Not knowing the exactly process to cook. I read some recipes first. Keep what I had learned in mind, I got down with cooking. Almost an hour later, three simple but delicious dishes were ready on the table.

Since Mom couldn’t get home until thirty minutes later, I started to do some cleaning. It was not difficult for me. Mopping thoroughly, the floor was quite clean.

No sooner had everything been ready Mom came back. I couldn’t wait to show what I had been done for her. A big smile with both surprise and satisfy spread on Mom’s face when she found the hearty(丰盛的) dinner and the tidy room. At that moment, pride rose from a bottom of my heart. Although she fell a little tired, everything was worthwhile.

Answer 1

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【解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者为妈妈庆祝三八节的故事。

第一处：考查定语从句。句意：放学之后我立刻去了超市，在那里我购买了很多的蔬菜，鱼和肉。先行词为supermarket，在从句中做地点状语，故应该用关系副词where。

第二处：考查形容词。修饰process名词应该用形容词exact，而不用副词。

第三处：考查非谓语。句意：把我在书上学的东西牢记心间之后我就开始进行烹饪。此句谓语动词为got，因此keep 应该是用非谓语，I 与keep之间为主动关系，所以应该用keeping。

第四处：考查固定短语。get down to doing“开始着手做某事”。故把with改为to。

第五处：考查非谓语。句意：彻底打扫之后，地板变得非常干净。此句谓语为was，所以mop 用非谓语，mop 与the floor 之间为被动关系，所以要用过去分词。

第六处：考查固定句型。no sooner… than…一……就……。句意：没等一切准备就绪，妈妈就回来了。故Mom前加than。

第七处：考查语态。句意：我迫不及待的为她展示我做的一切。“我”与“做”是主动关系，所以had been done错误，要去掉been。

第八处：考查名词。句意：妈妈脸上露出吃惊和满意的笑容。both … and…表前后并列，词性一致，surprise为名词，因此satisfaction也用名词。

第九处：考查冠词。句意：那时候，自豪之情从自己心底油然而生。自己心底为特指，应该用the，不用a。

第十处：考查代词。根据前后语境可知，此处表示“我虽然有点累，但感觉一切都值得”。是我不是她，所以用I 不用she。