假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:(1)．每处错误及其修改均仅限一� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

精英家教网 > 高中英语 > 题目详情

19．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Young people have different attitude towards music．As we all known，most people throughout the world love music．Anyway，nowadays young people have begun to show enthusiasm for pop stars．Many young people have a greatly passion for different kinds of pop music．They buy CDs and to download songs from the Internet．They enjoy the excitement pop music bring，and try to convey their own ideas in pop music．
As far as I concerned，we cannot deny that pop music is an essential part of our life．However，follow pop music blind should be discouraged．That we should do is to take a more critical attitude towards the pursuit of pop music．

分析文章大意：本文主要讲了对流行音乐的态度．我们都知道，全世界的人都喜欢音乐．然而，现在的年轻人开始对明星表现出很大的热情．许多年轻人对不同的流行音乐表现出极大的热情．他们买CD或者从网上下载音乐．他们喜欢流行音乐给他们带来的兴奋．然而，盲目得喜欢流行音乐应该被阻止．我们应该做的是对流行音乐的追求有一个更加批判的态度．

解答 Young people have different attitude towards music．As we all known，most people throughout the world love music．
                                          attitudes                                       know
Anyway，nowadays young people have begun to show enthusiasm for pop stars．Many young people have a greatly passion
However                                                                                                                                                 great
for different kinds of pop music．They buy CDs and to download songs from the Internet．They enjoy the excitement pop music bring，
                                                                            去掉                                                                                                         brings
and try to convey their own ideas in pop music．

As far as I∧concerned，we cannot deny that pop music is an essential part of our life．However，follow pop music blind should
               am            As far as I∧concerned                                                                                                              following            blindly
be discouraged．That we should do is to take a more critical attitude towards the pursuit of pop music．
                        What
1．attitude→attitudes 考查名词单复数．attitude是可数名词，前面有different修饰，所以用复数形式．
2．known→know 考查谓语动词形式．本句是主动语态，所以用know而不是known．
3．Anyway→However 考查副词．前后两句之间的关系是转折关系，又有逗号隔开，所以用however．
4．greatly→great 考查形容词．本句是修饰名词，所以要用形容词的形式．
5．删除to 考查动词形式．句中的download和前面的buy应该是并列关系，所以应该用动词原形，不需要to．
6．bring→brings 考查主谓一致．主语是pop music，所以谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式．
7．I后加am 考查谓语动词．As far as I am concerned是固定句式，意思是"我认为"．
8．follow→following 考查非谓语动词．本句需要用动名词作主语．
9．blind→blindly 考查副词．修饰动词短语，所以要用副词形式．
10．That→What 考查名词性从句．该句中含有主语从句．从句中缺少宾语，所以用what．

点评改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．

练习册系列答案

年级	高中课程	年级	初中课程
高一	高一免费课程推荐！	初一	初一免费课程推荐！
高二	高二免费课程推荐！	初二	初二免费课程推荐！
高三	高三免费课程推荐！	初三	初三免费课程推荐！
更多初中、高中辅导课程推荐,点击进入>>

相关习题

科目：高中英语 来源： 题型：选择题

4．To our great relief，Mom's illness turned out not to be so serious as we ____．（　　）

A．

had feared

B．

feared

C．

would fear

D．

were fearing

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英语 来源： 题型：短文改错

5．假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分．
My list of favorite books are long．I read a lot and I just keep finding new favorites．In my family，we often talk about the books we are reading and passing around our favorites．It benefits a whole family．
I discovered how share favorite books can help strength a friendship long ago．When I was a kid，my friend Liz became very sicker and was going to miss a lot of school．I fill a big bag with some of my favorite books for her read．She never forgot that．Today，she lives thousand of miles away from me，but she sometimes e-mails with me about the books she is reading．

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英语 来源： 题型：短文改错

7．下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
As a senior three student，it won't take long after I graduate．Now，I have much to share with my fellow student．
Firstly，I'd like to show my appreciation to those stand by me all the way，teachers，parents and friends included．Without their help and advice，my life will be different．Secondly，it's high time for I to say sorry to the classmates whom I hurt or misunderstand．I firm believe that communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship．Thirdly，I've made up my mind to make every effort to study，so hard work is the key to a success．Finally I want to express my hope which all the younger fellows can make full use of time，because time and tide wait for no man．

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英语 来源： 题型：完形填空

14．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

As far as I can remember，grow up in Ohio left many good memories and very few bad ones．We rented a home near a lake where I spent good time of my life．I attended to school to learn a variety of course，and went camping overnight in the woods．My dog and I would go fishing in the lake that I mentioned early．During the winter we will come down at night and go ice-skating on the lake．In Ohio the snow could be heavily sometimes and too deep to walk in as I was not that tall at the time．It was not until I was sixteen and moved to California when the life was changed．This was a tough change for me because the area total differed from Ohio．There was no rivers or lakes to fish in at a11．

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英语 来源： 题型：短文改错

4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

2015Spring Festival is coming now．I plan buy something for my parents．What I want to give them back is a VIP card for a health club but they need enough exercise．My father works hardly as a teacher，spent most of his time at school．My mother loves reading and often buried herself in her books．Therefore，all of them should exercise more from now on．
I want to give them this card to express my thank and love．I hope that they will be able to get relaxing in the health club and make more friends there．At the same time，I hope that they can take care with their health．

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英语 来源： 题型：阅读理解

11．Mum，it's me．Hopefully，this Mothering Sunday you will get to hear those three words．I will，of course，try to phone you．I hope we will be able to speak for the allowed 10minutes．But I suspect many inmates will be using the phone，so if I don't call and if we don't speak，then this is what I would have said：
It's not your fault that I am here．I know that deep in your heart you have questioned whether my current circumstance is somehow your fault，if the reckless stupidity of my past is somehow a failure on your part．It is not．Only one person is to blame，only one person should hurt-me．You have always taught me that when the room goes dark，you can wait for the lights to be switched back on or you can search in the dark and turn the light on yourself．You are my light．You always have been and always will be．There is nobody I admire more，nobody I have strived harder to please in my life，which is why my current failure hurts me so much．
I am so sorry that I will not be there to see you，but I want you to know that now，as always，you are here with me．In my darkest hours，and in the coldest loneliness of my past few months，my mind has so often wandered to the past，to when it was you and me-and I have been able to smile．Yours is the strength that I draw upon．
A parent's job is to make sure that they pass on the best of themselves to their children．You have done that．It is the inner you in me that will get me through this．
I have failed you so epically，but you have never failed me．If I think back to the tears I shed when Dad left，all those years ago，I see you through their misty glaze．You holding me and you telling me we'd be OK，and we will be．We are and always will be the best team．
Childhood heroes such as footballers，actors and rock stars are clichéd．If the job's done right，a child's heroes should be their parents-you are mine．The strength you showed after the divorce from Dad to find your biological parents，to go to university and get your teaching qualifications，to begin your life again，is the strength that I draw on now．It is the belief in myself，it is the belief you have in me，that tells me that once I am released I can and will rebuild my life．I will make you proud again．I will make you happy to have me as your son．Yours is the will that gets me through every day．
I don't believe you can judge a person for the mistakes they make，as we all make them，but you can judge them for what they do afterwards．And after this，when it is all over，you will still have a son with the same hopes and dreams．They have not diminished．If you can dream it，then you have to believe it can happen-right？
So this Mothering Sunday，please think back to that morning in the 80s，the first Mother's Day without Dad，when a six-year-old me got up early and made breakfast for you．Do you remember it？Could you ever forget？A slice of bread a doorstep thick and a wedge of cheese equally dense．You didn't have to eat it，but you did，chewing every dry mouthful．I know now why you forced yourself-because it had been made with love．Well，things don't change this year-this letter is that bread and cheese （it sure has plenty of the cheese!）．
I love you so much．I am sorry I have let you down，but you have taught me that we will always pick ourselves up and become better than we were before．Thank you for everything and this year，more than ever：
Happy Mothering Sunday．
Love，your son

66．According to the passage，what made the author most upset at present？C
A．Losing his freedom temporarily．
B．Being unable to phone his mother．
C．Failing to live up to his mother's expectations．
D．Having no chance to spend the weekend with mother．
67．What does the underlined word"this"in Paragraph 4refer to？B
A．Mothering Sunday．
B．Dark time．
C．His mistake．
D．Near future．
68．What did the author do in the loneliness of his past months？C
A．He summed up the causes of the failure in his life．
B．He planned to help his mother find her birth parents．
C．He recalled the fond memories of being with his mother．
D．He prepared himself to go to university for further studies．
69．Which of the following is closest in meaning to the underlined word"clichéd"in Paragraph 6？D
A．Ridiculous．
B．Liberal．
C．Explicit．
D．Common．
70．Which of the following can best describe the author's mother？B
A．Selfless but stubborn．
B．Guilty but determined．
C．Selfish but responsible．
D．Caring but envious．

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英语 来源： 题型：阅读理解

8．Suppose you work in a big firm and find English very important for your job because you often deal with foreign businessmen．Now you are looking for a place where you can improve your English，especially your spoken English．
Here are some advertisements about English language training from newspapers．You may find the information you need．

Global English Center
General English in all four skills listening，speaking，reading，and writing．
*3-month（700yuan），6-month（1，200yuan）and one-year（2，000yuan）courses．
*Choice of morning or evening classes，3hours per day，Mon．-Fri．
*Experienced college English teachers．
*Close to city center and bus stops．
Tel 67705272 Add 105Zhongshan Road，100082

Modern Language School
Special courses in English for business，travel，banking，hotel management and office skills．
*Small classes（12-16students）on Sat．& Sun．from 200-500p．m．
*Native English teachers from Canada and the USA．
*Language lab and computers supplied．
*3-month course 1，050yuan； 6-month course 1，850yuan．
Write or phone Modern Language School，675Park Road.100056
Tel 67353019

The 21st Century English Training Centre
*We specialize in effective teaching at all levels．
*We offer morning or afternoon classes．Both three months and a half at a cost of 800yuan．
*We also have a six-week TOEFL preparation class during winter and summer holidays．
*Entrance exams：June 1and Dec.1．
*Only 15-minute walk from city center．
Call 67801642for more information．

The International House of English
*Three/Six-month English courses for students of all levels at very low cost 60yuan for 12hours per week．
*Convenient class hours 900-1200a．m．and 200-500p．m．
*A four-month evening program for developing speaking skills（same cost as day classes）．
*Free sightseeing and social activities．
*Very close to the Central Park．
For further information call 67432308．

70．You work from 900a．m．to 430p．m．every day．Which school will you choose？A．
A．Global English Center and the International House．
B．Global English Center and Modem Language School．
C．Modern Language School and the 21st Century．
D．The 21st Century and the International House．
71．The 21st Century is different from the other three schools in thatB．
A．its teaching quality is better  B．it requires an entrance examination
C．its courses are more advanced   D．it is nearest to the city center
72．You will probably prefer to go to the International House because itC．
A．offers sightseeing and social activities at low prices
B．costs less than the other schools
C．has a special course in spoken English
D．has native English teachers
73．If you take the four-month evening program at the International House，you will pay aboutD．
A.60yuan   B.240yuan C.720yuan   D.960yuan．

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英语 来源： 题型：阅读理解

18．Kompong Phhluk Private Tour
Depart the city for an unspoiled floating community called Kompong Phhluk which is astonishing for its stilted-house villages and flooded forest．
Stop on the way for the Rolous Market tour．This is a great chance for you to take the photos of locals selling vegetables，different fish species and other local produce．
After this market tour we'll all have a boat trip to the floating community of Kompong Phhluk，visit an island pagoda，school and houses standing on 8 or 10m high stilts，fish farms and learn about the village life．
Stop and have lunch in a family's house before getting into a row boat and venturing into the flooded forest，the habitat to some famous water-bird species．
Eventually we jump back into the big boat and set off for the largest fresh water lake in SE Asia，Tonle Sap．
Tour Details
•Departs 8.30am
•Returns around 2pm
•A picnic lunch with sandwiches and drinks is provided．We cannot provide local food from the area due to poor sanitation，lack of hygiene standards and refrigeration．
•No passes required
Rates
•These rates are based on an English speaking guide．
•Rates include all transport，water and a picnic lunch．
•Children 11 years and under are 50%．
•Children 4 years and below are free．
•If your group is larger than 5 people please email us for the best rate．
Number of People    Price Per Person
1 Person                65
2 People                45
3 People                40
4 People                35
5 People                32
What to Wear
•Please be mindful of your clothing and try to avoid anything too revealing．
•We strongly recommend a sunglasses，hat and sunscreen．
General Information
•This is a poor rural village，please be mindful of the environment．
•Please do not hand things out to villagers，for this contributes to creating a begging cycle
and can create jealousy．
•We recommend heading to the toilet before you go on this trip as facilities are very basic．
70．Kompong Phhluk is famous for itsB
A．local vegetables and different fish species
B．stilted-house villages and flooded forest
C．Rolous Market and island pagoda
D．water-bird habitat and fish farms
71．A private trip for two parents and a 3-year-old boy costsC．
A.40               B.80           C.90           D.120
72．Which of the following is not included in the rates？D
A．A tourist guide．B．Transport．C．Drinks．D．Local food．
73．We can conclude from the passage thatA．
A．the living standard in the village is quite low
B．the tourist facilities along the way are quite good
C．revealing clothes are appropriate in the hot weather
D．giving local children small gifts is strongly recommended．

查看答案和解析>>

同步练习册答案

练习册

高中

初中

小学