Question

【题目】阅读下面短文，结合图表内容，按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的短文。

The Ministry of Education of the People’s Republic of China is moving to ban teachers from assigning homework on mobile apps or asking parents to grade students’ homework as part of an effort to save students’ eyesight. Through these efforts, the overall myopia (近视) rate among teenagers reduces by more than 0.5 percentage points per year from 2019 until 2023.

Provinces with a high incidence (发生率) of myopia are required to cut at least 1 percentage point per year.By 2030, the myopia rate for 6-year-old children should be below 3 percent, for primary school students, below 38 percent, for middle school students, below 60 percent, and for high school students, below 70 percent. Along with banning app-based homework assignments, the regulation would limit the use of electronic devices to 30 percent of total teaching time and instead encourage homework to be completed by hand on paper.

（写作内容）

1. 用约30个词概括上述图文内容；

2. 结合上述信息，简要分析导致学生近视问题的主要原因；

3. 请你从社会和个人两方面谈谈如何保护学生的视力（不少于两点）。

（写作要求）

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

（评分标准）

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】The continuously-increasing myopia rate among students has caused public concern. Such is the gravity of the situation that the authority has decided to ban teachers from using social media to assign homework.

Many factors contribute to the myopia problem. With the popularity of digital products, an increasing number of students fix their eyes on the screen at least 4 hours every day. Moreover, academic burden forces students to overuse their eyes, which worsens the situation.

Immediate action should be taken to deal with the problem. First, the government should update the relevant rule to reduce school time, ensuring the students to use eyes less. Second, we students should say no to too much use of electronic devices. We’d better look into the distance and do eye exercise regularly, easing the tiredness of eyes.

Since eyes are the window of our soul, we should take measures to protect them. (150 words)

【解析】

本篇书面表达是一篇读写任务，要求写一篇概要并分析问题的原因及提出建议。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一篇读写任务：1. 用约30个词概括图文内容；2. 结合上述信息，简要分析导致学生近视问题的主要原因；3. 请你从社会和个人两方面谈谈如何保护学生的视力（不少于两点）。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：myopia（近视），continuously-increasing（持续增长的），factor（因素），popularity（流行），public concern（公众关注），digital product（数码产品），overuse（过度使用），gravity（严重性）及measures（措施）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意概要的词数要求、主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。