Question

8．据报道，今年国庆来自全国各地约11万群众在天安门广场观看升国旗仪式．升旗仪式结束后，广场上滞留了多达5吨左右的垃圾．150名保洁员耗时30分钟才清理完毕．请根据以下要求写一篇短文：
①简要描述报道内容．
②针对现象发表个人看法．
③提出文明倡议．
注意：
1．词数：120词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2．参考词汇：天安门广场Tian'anmen Square；升旗仪式flag-raising ceremony；保洁员cleaner
As was reported，about 110thousand people from all over the country           ．

Answer 1

分析 本文为文明及环保类话题作文．
话题背景为：年国庆来自全国各地约11万群众在天安门广场观看升国旗仪式．升旗仪式结束后，广场上滞留了多达5吨左右的垃圾．150名保洁员耗时30分钟才清理完毕．
写作主题可以为：保护环境，人人有责
写作要点为：1，描述话题内容；2，分析原因；3，提供建议及呼吁．

解答 One possible version：
As was reported，about 110 thousand people from all over the country gathered at Tian'anmen Square on October 1，watching the grand flag-raising ceremony．However，a large amount of rubbish was left after the crowd gradually broke up．It was not until 30 minutes later that 150 cleaners disposed of all rubbish．
To be frank，I was really shocked and angry on reading the news．We have been educated never to litter in public since our childhood．However，on such a formal occasion，it's surprising that our citizens should behave so badly in public．From the point of my views，I felt ashamed of this kind of conduct．
Therefore，as a citizen I firmly advocate that we should take good care of our living environment and cherish the fruits of other people's labor．Only if each of us behaves ourselves and makes contributions to our civilized and harmonious society can we enjoy a better life together．
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点评 考生需根据话题信息，根据所提供信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．