Question

【题目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

学校的校刊正在举行征文比赛，请同学们分享自己第一次做某件事情的特别经历。请以“我第一次XXX”为题写一篇作文参加比赛。

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Answer 1

【答案】 My first trip to tianchi

I have experienced many firsts, but the most unforgettable one is that I saw the Tianchi of Changbai Mountain for the first time.

Last July, my family and I took a tour to Changbai Mountain. We climbed up from the west slope, where the scenery basically remains the most primitive state. After climbing 1440 steps, we finally reached the top of the mountain. Although we were very tired, the temperature on the top of the mountain was very suitable, making us feel extremely comfortable. What's more, we were lucky enough to see the Tianchi, which is like a huge mirror inlaid among the peaks. It's said that 70% of the people who came to Changbai Mountain for the first time can't see the Tianchi because the weather on the top of the mountain is unpredictable, and the first time I came to Changbai mountain, I saw tianchi, which is really amazing.

【解析】

本篇书面表达是开放性作文，要求以“我第一次XXX”为题写一篇征文。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求以“我第一次XXX”为题写一篇征文：学校的校刊正在举行征文比赛，请同学们分享自己第一次做某件事情的特别经历。请以“我第一次XXX”为题写一篇作文参加比赛。时态应为一般过去时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； unforgettable（难忘的），experience（经历），primitive state（原始状态），suitable（适宜的），comfortable（舒适的），inlay（镶嵌），amazing（不可思议的）及unpredictable（不定的、难以预测的）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。