Question

6．Ann与Mary是同班同学．一天Ann拿了Mary的计算器没有及时归还，为此两人发生了争吵．Ann内心很自责很后悔，不知道怎么办，于是写信告诉她的好友Lisa，寻求帮助．
假如你是Lisa，请按以下要求用英语给Ann写封信：
1、谈谈你对此事的看法；     
2、给Ann提一些建议．
注意：字数100-120，信的开头和写信人姓名已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：计算器----calculator         弥补----make up for         后悔；悔意----repentance（n．）

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇书信体作文．作文的主旨是：帮人解决困难．主要包括两大方面的内容：自己看法和建议．文章的重要短语都已经提示出来了，而且要点比较齐，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯流畅就行了，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式． 同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides，further，Believe it or not等．在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．
As a good friend of yours，I can fully understand your repentance，not to mention that you didn't return the calculator borrowed from Mary in time．（高分句型一）
Since it has happened，I think what you are supposed to do first is to apologize to Mary rather than cry over spilt milk．（高分句型二）
I'm convinced that your friendship will be strengthened if both of you have a generous and forgiving heart．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Ann，
     I'm really sorry to have learned that you quarrelled with your classmate Mary the other day andhave no idea about how to make up for your relationship．As a good friend of yours，I can fully understand your repentance，not to mention that you didn't return the calculator borrowed from Mary in time．（高分句型一）
     Since it has happened，I think what you are supposed to do first is to apologize to Mary rather than cry over spilt milk．（高分句型二）Believe it or not，the courage to admit mistake will make her look at you with new respect．Besides，another thing worth remembering is to be a good listener to her in your communication and try to see things from her perspective．I'm convinced that your friendship will be strengthened if both of you have a generous and forgiving heart．（高分句型三）
Hope my suggestions do help．
Yours，
Lisa

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．