Question

大学生活即将开始．你将面对新的学习和生活环境。请根据提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你打算如何安排你的大学生括。内容要点应包括：
1. 确定新的学习目标；
2. 改进学习方法；
3. 学会独立生活；
4. 参加各种课外活动；
5. 处理好与同学的关系；
注意: 1. 短文的内容要连贯、完整；
2. 短文单词数： 100 左右(开头己给出的单词不计人单词总数）。
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Answer 1

One possible version：
I will go to college in the near future. I have some plans for my future college life. As is known to everybody, study always comes first, so I plan to set new study goals for me to work for and improve my way of learning. What’s more, as I am away from my parents, it is necessary for me to learn to live independently and deal with difficult problems or tough situations. In my spare time I will actively take part in different kinds of school activities, for example，I will often go to the English Corner to practise my spoken English. In addition, getting along well with my classmates and teachers is an important part of my personal development. I hope I will have a wonderful college life.

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求写进入大学后的计划安排，写作时要注意以下几点。首先，因为是对未来做计划，所以在时态选择上要使用一般将来时。其次文章要点较多，在注意不要遗漏要点的同时，还要在陈述各要点时采用适当的连接词以使文章内容有条理性，有层次感。再次在内容上要适当发挥想象，做出细节上的补充，以使行文连贯，内容完整。最后要注意使用高级词汇以提高文章档次。
【亮点说明】本篇范文开门见山提出中心，然后详细介绍自己的各项计划打算，这种结构安排使文章中心突出，目的明确。文中插入语what’s more、in addition等插入语的使用使文章层次分明，脉络清晰。此外文中各种结构的使用和多种句式的出现也是文章的一大亮点，比如不定式短语it is necessary for me to learn to live independently，动名词短语getting along well with my classmates and teachers is an important part of my personal development，定语从句As is known to everybody，状语从句as I am away from my parents等。