Question

【题目】进入高三以来，同学们普遍感到压力倍增。就此问题，最近你班开展了一次以“压力”为主题的班会。在班会上，大家各抒己见，就如何缓解压力提出了自己的看法。请你为学校英文报写一篇短文，内容要点包括：

1、压力的来源；

2、压力与成败的关系；

3、你自己是如何解决压力的；

4、推荐一种你认为行之有效的缓解压力的方法。

注意：1. 词数：120左右； 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Recently we have held a class meeting to discuss the pressure upon every one of us Senior

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Answer 1

【答案】

We have recently held a class meeting to discuss the pressure upon every one of us senior three students.

It is widely acknowledged that we are under great pressure, which seems to be on the increase .The main reasons are as follows .On the one hand ,we all worry about the coming College Entrance Examination. On the other hand , we bear too much pressure from our parents’high expectations.

Pressure has a positive influence and negative effect .A certain amount of stress may provide motivation and give us the purpose to life .So it is easier for us to succeed in the competition. However ,too much of it will make success highly impossible.

Since it is unlikely to avoid pressure in our life, we have to learn how to deal with it .There are some good ways to reduce stress ,such as traveling ,doing some exercise, listening to some relax music or sharing my feelings with my friends.

Of all the ways ,I think the most effective way is to share our happiness and sorrow with our friends ,which will help to make us feel better .I hope everyone can reduce too much stress in study and live a relaxing and happy life.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。除了表达这些要点以外，还要阐述自己的观点，这就要求考生自己拓展发挥，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，Second，Besides，What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：as follows如下，deal with处理，live a relaxing and happy life过着放松快乐的生活。范文中的句式多变，运用不同的语法知识： It is widely acknowledged that we are under great pressure, which seems to be on the increase .这句话用了it做形式主语和非限制性定语从句， it is unlikely to avoid pressure in our life, we have to learn how to deal with it ，这句话用了it is unlikely to do sth的句型，Of all the ways ,I think the most effective way is to share our happiness and sorrow with our friends ,which will help to make us feel better .这句话也用了非限制性定语从句，还有范文使用On the one hand ,On the other hand ,这样的词使文章更加连贯。