Question

星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：
1.时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）；
2.活动的过程；
3.你对于这次活动的评论。
注意：1. 词数120左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!

解析2013年江西高考英语书面表达题为英文报道，属于文字类命题作文，以叙事为主，论说为辅。命题具有贴近生活，容易表达的特点。小题大做方面游刃有余。文字提示既有硬性要求（如“一次登山活”；“时间与地点：4月10日，大青山”，又给予考生一定的发挥空间（如：活动的过程；你对于这次活动的评论），为考生的思维多样性和开放性奠定了基础。话题体现了实用性、交际性、人文性、思想性，场景设计也体现了语言运用宗旨。符合中学生日常生活、学习逻辑；符合课程标准要求：高三学生毕业时，能根据文字、图画及图表提供的信息写短文或报告；还能写语意连贯、结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度；同时能在写作中达到文体规范的要求。
参考习作体现了“一二三”原则。“一”指短文中最好有一个定语从句或特殊句式（如：倒装句Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us）.；“二”指若可能，再使用其他两个复合句或非谓语结构（如：复合句When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. / 非谓语结构Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.）“三”指三处亮点——较好的短语、词组、连接词或很得体的词汇。(如：set out for；cheered；benefited…a lot; promoted等)