假如你是李华．你的朋友Tom给你写信诉说心中的烦恼:自己每天忙于学习.朋友很少.感觉很孤独.尽管自己也想改变这种状况.但不知该如何去做．现在请你写封回信.给他提供一些建议．内容要点如下:1．羞涩.不自信可能是问题所在,2．微笑拉近与同学的距离,3．多与同学单独交流．注意:1．词数100左右,开头已给出.不计入总词数．2．可以适� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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5．假如你是李华．你的朋友Tom给你写信诉说心中的烦恼：自己每天忙于学习，朋友很少，感觉很孤独，尽管自己也想改变这种状况，但不知该如何去做．现在请你写封回信，给他提供一些建议．内容要点如下：
1．羞涩、不自信可能是问题所在；
2．微笑拉近与同学的距离；
3．多与同学单独交流．
注意：1．词数100左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数．
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Tom，
   From your letter I know that you spend most of your time studying and hardly talk to your classmates．You feel quite lonely and wish to have good friends!
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________

                                                             Yours，
                                                             Li Hua．

分析题目要求给朋友Tom写一封回信，就Tom遇到的问题给他提一些建议．写作要点包括：问题可能在于不自信；用微笑拉近距离；多与同学交流等方面，词数在100词左右，开头和结尾不计入总词数；注意书信的格式；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性．
亮点说明：范文涵盖了所给要点，并注意语句的连贯性，也进行了适当的拓展；范文还使用了定语从句、状语从句等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力．
语法方面：定语从句with whom you feel you have a lot in common；时间状语从句when they are alone；条件句Once you have more confidence；固定句型find it easier to start等，显示了较强的语法功底，使作文句式多样；
篇章结构方面：范文注意使用First of all，The next thing，and等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得很有条理；
短语和搭配方面：范文使用了have a lot in common，talk to，instead of，as many friends as you want等，使作文的内容变得充实．

解答 Dear Tom，
From your letter I know that you spend most of your time studying and hardly talk to your classmates．You feel quite lonely and wish to have good friends!I think your problem is mainly about confidence．Don't be shy．Look at your classmates．Are there any people with whom you feel you have a lot in common？（高分句型）
First of all，you must smile at your classmates．One smile speaks louder about your wish to make friends than any words．
The next thing to do is try to talk to your classmates．The best time to do this is between classes or during your lunch break．You may find it easier to start by talking to people when they are alone，instead of in a group．（高分句型）
Smile first，talk next and slowly you will make friends．Once you have more confidence，you can make as many friends as you want．（高分句型）
Yours，
Li Hua

点评应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感．（1）认真审题，确定体裁．（2）构思要点．根据题目要求，理解要表达的要点．设计好文章的层次段落，考虑所用时态、人称等，把要点串联起来，构成文章框架．（3）选词造句，避难选易．（4）认真检查，避免错误．仔细阅读全文，查找是否有错，注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误，句式是否正确．逻辑是否一致．

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