Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Simon发来电子邮件说他准备暑假来中国旅游，想要你推荐两三座历史文化名城，请你给他回封邮件，并说明推荐的理由。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Simon,

I am glad to learn that you will visit China this summer.

You want to visit just a few beautiful cities in China. I suggest you should travel to Beijing and Nanjing, because these two cities have well preserved traditional Chinese culture and have numerous places of interest. Beijing is now the capital of China, which lies in North China, and Nanjing, a large city on the Yangtze River in South China, used to be where quite a few dynasties founded their capital. I believe you will enjoy these two ancient and modern cities. If time permits, you can as well visit another modern large city Shanghai, which is very near Nanjing.

Hoping to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文属于应用文，要求写一份邮件，向来中国旅行的朋友推荐两三座历史文化古城，并介绍相关情况。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.知晓来访

2.推荐古城

1）推荐原因

2）古城介绍

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be glad to; well preserved traditional Chinese culture; numerous places of interest; ancient and modern cities; as well; hear from

第三步：连词成句

1. I am glad to learn that you will visit China this summer.

2. I suggest you should travel to Beijing and Nanjing, because these two cities have well preserved traditional Chinese culture and have numerous places of interest.

3. Beijing is now the capital of China, which lies in North China, and Nanjing, a large city on the Yangtze River in South China, used to be where quite a few dynasties founded their capital.

4. I believe you will enjoy these two ancient and modern cities.

5. If time permits, you can as well visit another modern large city Shanghai, which is very near Nanjing.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改