Question

你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：
1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；
2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；
3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
注意： 1.词数不少于50.
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Joe

Answer 1

Dear Chris,
How is everything going?
I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.
I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Joe

解析本题考查学生应用文写作，是一封书信，但开头和签名都已给出，学生只需写出要点即可。书信一般开头应有寒暄的句子，然后过渡到想要表达的内容。最后要有结束语。本文的得分点分布在五个内容上：寒暄、三件事和结束语。
【亮点说明】文章范文使用了高级从句及省略：1. I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.
2.高级短语：put off    look forward to  hear from
考点：考查应用文写作