Question

【题目】假如你是李华,你收到朋友 Tom 的来信,信中提到他打算寒假来北京参观故宫。请你根据以下提示给他写一封回信,介绍故宫的一些情况。

要点:1. 地理位置:位于北京的中心;

2. 历史:始建于明朝,20 万人用时大约 14 年,建成于 1420 年;

3. 故宫被誉为世界五大宫之首,每年吸引上百万的游客。注意:

1. 词数 100 左右;

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:故宫the Imperial Palace 明朝 the Ming Dynasty

Dear Tom,

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I am so glad to hear that you will come to Beijing and visit the Imperial Palace. And I am honored to introduce something about it.

The Imperial Palace, also known as the Forbidden City, is located in the center of Beijing. Dating from the Ming Dynasty, the Imperial Palace has a long history. The construction started in 1407 and it took 200,000 workers about 14 years to build it. It was finally completed in 1420. The Imperial Palace has collected all kinds of ancient treasures around China, making it enjoy a high fame as the top of five greatest palaces in the world. Every year millions of visitors from all over the world visit it and are impressed with its beauty.

I am sure you will enjoy yourself during the winter vacation. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：假如你是李华,你收到朋友 Tom 的来信,信中提到他打算寒假来北京参观故宫。请你根据以下提示给他写一封回信,介绍故宫的一些情况。要点:1. 地理位置:位于北京的中心;2. 历史:始建于明朝,20 万人用时大约 14 年,建成于 1420 年;3. 故宫被誉为世界五大宫之首,每年吸引上百万的游客。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； The Imperial Palace（故宫），Forbidden City（紫禁城），construction（建设），complete（完成）， treasure（珍宝），collect（收集），fame（名声）及Ming Dynasty（明朝）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。