Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生在疫情之后来中国旅游，有两条线路可以选择:”长江之行”或者”泰山之旅”，Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括:

1. 你建议的路线；

2. 你的理由；

3. 你的祝愿。

注意:

1. 词数100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m more than delighted to know that you are paying a visit to China after the epidemic, which is surely a perfect destination for you to enjoy your holiday.

Both the Yangtze River and Mount Tai enjoy great reputation worldwide and are well worth a visit. As far as I’m concerned, going to Mount Tai is a better choice. First and foremost, it boasts breathtaking wonderful sights which even attracted many emperors and great poets deeply in history. In addition, climbing die mountain is really character-building, which is not only good for your physical health but also brings you lots of courage and endurance. After reaching the top, you can enjoy the fantastic sunrise till the morning, which is really a feast for eyes and makes your journey worthwhile. It’s such a must-see place that you won’t be disappointed when you go there.

Hope my suggestion will be of help. Wish you a good time.

Yours sincere,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Jim回信建议他选择哪一条旅游线路。

第一步：审题。

体裁：信件应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。

要点：1 Jim要来中国旅游

2建议的旅游路线

3建议的理由

4 表达祝愿

结构布局：

第一段，听到Jim要来中国旅游，就询问的旅游线路提建议。

第二段， 建议的旅游路线和理由：泰山之旅。泰山景色优美，如云海，日出等，爬山可以锻炼身体，还能锻炼毅力等。

第三段，表达祝愿，希望有所帮助。

第二步：列重点词语，词组（注意好词的使用）

如：pay a visit, be concerned about, classic, as far as I am concerned, spectacular, make an impression on, sea of clouds, sunrise, fantastic, physical exercise, perseverance等

第三步：连词成句（注意好句型的使用，如非谓语动词，复合句，注意拼写和时态问题）

如：Hearing that you are paying a visit to China after the epidemic, I am writing to make suggestions on the tour destination that you are quire concerned about. 等

第四步：连句成篇（注意衔接词的使用）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);

3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。

第五步：润色修改。