Question

16．下面四幅图画描述的是Lily和Lina在上学路上发生的一幕．请根据图画所提供的信息，写出故事发生的经过，并简要发表个人观点．

注意：
    1．短文必须包括图画的主要内容，短文的内容要连贯完整．
    2．词数100左右．
    参考词汇：救护车ambulance．

Answer 1

分析 本文为图画作文．
写作主题可以为：遵守交通规则，注意安全
写作要点为：1，描述图画内容：车辆冲红灯，撞倒人后肇事逃逸，路人帮助，送医救治；2，呼吁大家遵守交通规则，避免酿成惨剧．

解答 One possible version：
One day，Lily and Lina were going to school happily when a speeding car ran into them．One of them was seriously injured and lay on the street，unconscious．Seeing the terrible scene，the driver drove his car away as fast as he could without stopping．At the very moment，some passersby rushed over．One man called 120 to get help．Minutes later，an ambulance came with a siren wailing．The injured girl was carried into the ambulance by a passerby and sent quickly to hospital．
From the story we can see such people as the guilty driver should be punished by law．We do believe more people with a sense of justice can be found in our society．
（119 words）

点评 考生需根据图画信息，揭示图画中的道理，根据所提供信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．