Question

4．假设你是李华，校英文报举行题为"我最喜欢的幽默大师---卓别林"的征文比赛，请你投稿参赛．
要点：
1．简要介绍卓别林；
2．谈谈你喜欢他的原因．
要求：
行文流畅，适当添加细节，字数100左右．
Charlie Chaplin，master of nonverbal humor，was born into a poor family．When he was young，his father died，leaving the family even worse off．Therefore，Charlie had to take the responsibility to care for his mother and brother．Even if he led a hard life，he managed to brighten the life of other people and created many famous characters，such as the littletramp，who encouraged many people in need．（高分句型一）
The reasons why I likeChaplin best are listed as follows．（高分句型二）Firstly，he worked hard to achieve his dream．Secondly，he had a sense of humor and was good at making a bad situation entertaining．What's more，his attitude towards life and determination to overcome difficulties always inspire me whenever I am in trouble．（高分句型三）
In general，I have learnt a lot from Charlie Chaplin．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇人物类命题作文．联系题干，以此为中心内容进行选材．考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：
1．要分析题干，围绕题干进行选材，在写作思路方面，题目要求写幽默大师卓别林，所以我们可以将他的外形、性格还有代表作简要介绍一下．
2．要点要齐全，将题目要求的内容罗列完整，重点对他进行简要介绍并列明喜欢他的主要原因，要注意层次结构，注意上下文的衔接．
3．注意时态与语态，全文以一般现在时为主，描述第三人时要注意动词形态的使用．
【范文亮点】


1．文章采用了have to do sth不得不做某事；take the responsibility担负责任；manage to do设法做成某事；the reason why…的原因；等高级表达；
2．文章采用了"Therefore、In general、What's more、Even if"等连接词使文章更加层次，连贯通顺．
3．who encouraged many people in need，在句中，出现了who引导的定语从句．
Even if he led a hard life，he managed to brighten the life of other people and created many famous characters，such as the little tramp，who encouraged many people in need．（高分句型一）
The reasons why I like Chaplin best are listed as follows．（高分句型二）
What's more，his attitude towards life and determination to overcome difficulties always inspire me whenever I am in trouble．（高分句型三）

解答 Charlie Chaplin，master of nonverbal humor，was born into a poor family．When he was young，his father died，leaving the family even worse off．Therefore，Charlie had to take the responsibility to care for his mother and brother．Even if he led a hard life，he managed to brighten the life of other people and created many famous characters，such as the little tramp，who encouraged many people in need．（高分句型一）
      The reasons why I like Chaplin best are listed as follows．（高分句型二）Firstly，he worked hard to achieve his dream．Secondly，he had a sense of humor and was good at making a bad situation entertaining．What's more，his attitude towards life and determination to overcome difficulties always inspire me whenever I am in trouble．（高分句型三）
       In general，I have learnt a lot from Charlie Chaplin．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．