Question

假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容应包括：

个人情况：年龄、性别、学历

个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况。

承诺：提供最佳服务

注意：

词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

生词：申请 apply（v.）,application (n.);志愿者 volunteer

Dear Sir /Madam,

My name is LiHua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

My name is LiHua .I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.

I am a girl of 18.As a college student, I have a keen interest in sports and I have always been looking forward to the games to be held here.

With the great fluency in English and the passion for sports, I suppose I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games. Besides, I have a good communicative competence and I am considered to be an outgoing, reliable and helpful person at college. What’s more,, I am familiar with the local conditions. I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participates in the games.

Now I formally apply for the job and I sincerely hope I can be accepted.

Yours faithfully,

LiHua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达是要求写一封申请信，类似于自我介绍，学生应该很容易把握写作要求。考生在写作之前必须认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，申请信要求介绍自己情况，所以要用一般现在时，当然也必须用第一人称。写作时不要根据材料逐字翻译，应该注意细节的补充以及文章结构上的衔接，以提高作文的档次。

【亮点说明】文章格式正确，要点全面。不仅As a college student;  with the great fluency in English and passion for sports，be familiar with， participates in ，apply for， 等短语使句子更为简洁生动，而且keen，qualified，等高级词汇的使用也使文章锦上添花，好的句子有：I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participates in the games.此外Besides ，What’s more 等插入语也让上下文衔接更为紧凑，读起来朗朗上口。

考点：考查提纲类作文。