Question

请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想像，写一篇短文。

标题为：My Teacher Mr. Moore

There’s a teacher Mr.Moore,

Who is lovely and thirty-four.

Always encouraging us to try,

He leads us to a world of “why”,

We all admire him more and more.

注意：1.不得照抄短诗原文；

2.必须结合短诗的内容，发挥想像，适当展开；

3.必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯；

4.短文不能写成诗歌形；

5.词数：120左右。

Answer 1

My Teacher Mr.Moore

Of all my teachers,Mr.Moore is the one who impresses me most.Though he is 34,he looks very young for his age.And he’s one of the most popular teachers in our school.

Compared with other teachers,Mr.Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching.He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting.In his opinion,we should not only know “what”,but also understand “why”.So,instead of giving us answers immediately,he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions.With his help,we’ve learned how to analyze and settle problems.What a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to!

He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.

解析:

本书面表达要求根据诗歌展开合理想像，所以按照诗歌内容，短文应该包含以下要素:

1.Mr.Moore 是我们的老师，他的年龄；

2.Mr.Moore的教学方法和给我们的启发；

3.我们都喜欢和羡慕Mr.Moore。