Question

15．假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你所在学校的学生会为适应新课程改革将成立（English Corner），你想参加"英语角"，你根据以下内容用英语写一篇短文．
1．参加"英语角"的两条理由；
2．对"英语角"的活动提出两条建议；
注意：1、词数   120字左右
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连惯．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一篇关于参加"英语角的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：参加"英语角"的两条理由，对"英语角"的活动提出两条建议．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为参加"英语角"的两条理由．第二部分为对"英语角"的活动提出两条建议．
重点词组：
adapt to适应
new curriculum reform 新课程改革
communicate with 交流
made efforts to do sth努力做某事
What's more而且，此外
as expected正如期料的一样

解答 In order to adapt to the new curriculum reform，our school will establish Enlish corner．（学校为适应新课程改革将成立英语角）
English coner is very popular，almost every school  has an English conner．It is a good way to learn English because we can practise English in it．In class we can only learn the grammar and some language points but at English conner we have to speak out．There are a lot of students communicating with each other．With the great passion，I made efforts to  recite words and sentences in order to talk with my English partner．Unconsciously I could speak English fruently．What's more，at an english conner，we don′t have to worry about our mistakes．（参加"英语角"的两条理由）
However，some English conner didn′t work as expected．so I have some suggestions：first，we should attend English conner in time，and we should not skip out it．second，we need certain topics at the English conner so that we have something to say．third，we can invite some people who is famous or who is good at English to help us．（对"英语角"的活动提出几条建议）

点评 第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．