Question

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假如你是来自美国的Peter，在中国留学期间，经常在马路上看到一些人不遵守交通规则，于是向某报社写信反映此情况，内容如下：
1．部分行人过马路时慢慢悠悠或攀爬护栏；
2．某些骑自行车的人擅闯红灯；
3．一些司机驾车时不系安全带；超速行驶；在开车时抽烟、打电话；
4．你的看法和建议……
注意：字数120左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入字数）
参考词汇：行人pedestrian；护栏 guardrail
Dear Editor,
I am a foreign student from America and I am studying in China. I find many people break the traffic rules here.
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Peter

Answer 1

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Possible version:
I am a foreign student from America and I am studying in China. I find many people break the traffic rules here. For example, some pedestrians cross the streets slowly and some jump over the guardrails in the streets. Some cyclists don’t stop when the traffic lights turn red. What’s worse, many drivers don’t fasten their seat belts while driving. Smoking, speaking on mobile phones and exceeding the speed limit while driving can be seen everywhere. In my opinion, these actions are very irresponsible and dangerous. It is our duty to obey the traffic rules. We must treasure our lives and protect the lives of others. So I suggest that those who break traffic rules should be fined or punished. Only in this way will they think twice about breaking traffic rules again.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Peter

解析试题分析：拿到作文题目，首先要认真审题，这是一篇提纲作文，假如你是来自美国的Peter，在中国留学期间，经常在马路上看到一些人不遵守交通规则，于是向某报社写信反映此情况，内容如下：1．部分行人过马路时慢慢悠悠或攀爬护栏；2．某些骑自行车的人擅闯红灯；3．一些司机驾车时不系安全带；超速行驶；在开车时抽烟、打电话；4．你的看法和建议……所以要用第一人称来写,且要用一般现在时。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求字数120词左右。
考点：提纲作文
点评：本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。