Question

【题目】短文写作

请观察所给的图画并根据你对该图画的理解写一篇英语短文，内容包括：

（1）简要描述图片，并说明该图片所揭露的现象；

（2）分析造成该现象的原因（至少两点）；

（3）提出自己的看法。

要求：1. 词数150左右。开头已经给出，不计入词数。

2. 文章中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

The Internet has long been regarded as a wonderful tool that allows students to gain insight to useful resources and information. However, this is not always the case.

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Answer 1

【答案】

The Internet has long been regarded as a wonderful tool that allows students to gain insight to useful resources and information. However, this is not always the case.

As is vividly shown in the picture, a boy is happy with the fact that he can depend on the Internet to finish tasks without any difficulty. It mirrors a common phenomenon. Nowadays, students tend to make use of the Internet to gain information they need.

There are some reasons accounting for it. To begin with, students find it convenient to surf the Internet for useful information, where problems can be solved with the help of several clicks. What’s more, there’s no doubt that the pressure to succeed also causes students to turn to computers for accurate answers. As a result, it’s likely that students will lose interest in studying, which is not beneficial to their overall development.

In my opinion, measures must be taken to solve the problem. Firstly, it is vital that students gain confidence in themselves and their abilities while doing tasks. Besides, what teachers and parents should do is to encourage students to be creative. Finally, doing tasks independently is of great significance.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是看图作文，所给指向非常明确，就是学生在网上搜题的答案，不再动脑筋做题。文章可以分三段来写：第一段描述图片并说明该图片所揭露的现象；第二段分析造成该现象的原因，注意至少要讲两点；第三段提出自己的看法，总结全文。写作时可适当添加细节以使行文连贯。注意使用高级词汇和高级句子提升文章档次。

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