Question

7．请简要描述图片，并根据图片的内容谈谈你对友谊的看法．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文，让我们写一篇关于友谊的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：在生活中，朋友不可或缺；何为真正的友谊；作者对待友谊的看法．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为在生活中，朋友不可或缺．第二部分为何为真正的友谊．第三部分为作者对待友谊的看法
重点短语与句型：
share joys and sorrows同甘共苦
As the saying goes 正如谚语所说
On the contrary恰恰相反
at the cost of 以…为代价
高分句型一：Besides，we need friends to share our joys and sorrows，otherwise we would feel lonely此句用了otherwise含蓄虚拟条件句
高分句型二：Moreover，they will encourage you to stick to what is right and tell us not to do what is wrong or illegal．此句用了2个what引导宾语从句
高分句型三：Whenever we have problems，we never hesitate to offer support to each other．此句Whenever 引导让步状语从句．

解答 In life we can hardly do without friends．There are many difficulties and problems we can't overcome with only our own efforts．Besides，we need friends to share our joys and sorrows，otherwise we would feel lonely（高分句型一）（在生活中，朋友不可或缺）
What is true friendship？A good friend is someone who respects you and who you respect．As the saying goes，"A friend in need is a friend indeed．"True friends are those who never desert you when you are in need．On the contrary，they will offer you sincere and selfless help even at the cost of their own interests．Moreover，they will encourage you to stick to what is right and tell us not to do what is wrong or illegal．（高分句型二）（何为真正的友谊）
In my opinion，true friendship is largely based on supporting each other．Whenever we have problems，we never hesitate to offer support to each other．（高分句型三）Besides，we are supposed to help and trust each other．In conclusion，true friendship will stand the test of time．（作者对待友谊的看法）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．