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13．假设你是星光中学的张红，将参加主题为"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英语演讲比赛．请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：
1．目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题．
2．骑自行车的益处，如能环保，有利健康等．
3．我的个人观点…
参考词汇：低碳生活：low-carbon life  环境：environment
保护：protect  健康：health  污染 pollution
注意：1．词数：80--100 词左右；
4．演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数．
Good morning，everyone，
I am Zhang Hong from Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles
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Answer 1

分析 本文是应用文中常见的演讲稿．话题是号召同学多骑自行车．有很强的可写性，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但只是一个提纲，考生还需要做适当的发挥．在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次．同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second，Besides，What's more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅．本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁的表达自己的观点．
【亮点说明】所给范文开头紧扣题目，起到了开篇点题的作用．As is known to all，with the improvement of people's living standards，cars have become a popular means of transport，bringing great convenience to our life．这句话用了定语从句和现在分词做状语，As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution．bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving．bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas．这句话用了动名词做主语．另外文章中上下文的衔接句成了本范文的一个亮点，For one thing，For another，What's more，等的使用使文章浑然一体．

解答 Good morning，everyone，
I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles"．
As is known to all，with the improvement of people's living standards，cars have become a popular means of transport，bringing great convenience to our life．（高分句型）However，they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams．
How can we solve the problems then？As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution．（高分句型）For one thing，bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving．For another，bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas．（高分句型）What's more，riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health．（高分句型）
Therefore，let's take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles．Come on and join us!
Thank you!

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．