Question

小伟减肥以后，感到身体疲倦、虚弱，不知如何是好，于是他写了一封电子邮件向健康专家求教。请根据下面内容，以小伟的名义写一封邮件。词数100以上。

原因：觉得自己太胖，体重不断增加，担心形象不美，有同学骂他。

过程：

1、去健身房，两三次就放弃了，感觉太累也没时间。

2、节食，坚持了大约一个星期，经常饿得不能继续他的学习。

3、悄悄服用减肥药，一开始有效果，体重迅速下降，但减肥药对他产生副作用。

Answer 1

Dear Health Expert,

I have got a problem and I need to ask for your help. I feel I am a little too fat. What’s worse, I am putting on weight all the time. I am very worried about my figure and how I look. I even fear that some of my classmates call me names.

At one time, I tried to work out in a gym two or three times, but I finally gave up just because I had no time for it and always felt very tired after doing exercise. Once I tried going on a diet. However, after about a week, I could not go on because I felt so hungry that I was not able to continue my studies. Then I bought and took weight-loss pills in secret. Shortly after, they did work and I was losing weight fast. But soon I felt tired and weak sometimes.

I know those pills usually have bad effects on our health. Thus, I don’t know what I should do. Could you be kind enough to give some good advice?

Best wishes

Xiao Wei

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇书信写作，首先要注意格式规范和正确。开头要有称呼，结尾要落款。书信的内容写信者小伟向健康专家求救。说明自己的肥胖问题和现在面临的身体问题。所以对于问题原因和过程的描述，尽量真实具体，以便于健康专家给予合理有效的建议。时态：用一般现在时。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。

【亮点说明】文章使用ask for your help，What’s worse，put on weight，be worried about，work out，give up，go on a diet，Shortly after，losie weight，have bad effects on等词组和短语，使得文章更加生动。叙述过程的时候，使用At one time，Once，Then，Shortly after说明顺序，使得文章条理清晰，表达准确。However, after about a week, I could not go on because I felt so hungry that I was not able to continue my studies.使用so…that…句型，表示“如此…以致…”，使得文章句式灵活多样。文章开头使用I have got a problem and I need to ask for your help.直接说明写信目的；结尾处使用Thus, I don’t know what I should do. Could you be kind enough to give some good advice?表达自己的请求。

考点：考查书信写作