Question

14．人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见．请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法．

赞成的理由	反对的理由	你的看法
1．广交朋友 2．可自由表达思想 3．利于外语学习	1．浪费时间 2．影响学习 3．可能上当受骗	？

注意：
1．文章必须包括表中的全部内容．
2．词数为100左右．
3．参考词汇：网络朋友on-line friend（s），上当受骗to be cheated．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇议论文，第一段赞同学生网上交友的人的观点，第二段是反对学生网上交友观点，第三段是表述作者自己的观点．
第一段陈述赞同的理由时作者用了Firstly，Secondly，they can express their feelings Besides，来连接，是文章有层次，并且很流畅．
第二段是反对的人的观点和他们的理由，作者没有重复第二段的方法而是用了 in addition来过渡．
第三段是作者自己的观点，范文中用In my opinion/From my point of view来表达自己的观点，观点明确，还有自己的令人信服的理由．
一篇好的作文要做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误，熟练运用好的词组．例如as follows、a waste of time get cheated、As for friendship 和widens our eyes and enriches our knowledge．都用了我们学过的重点短语
另外这篇文章里的好句型也是亮点，例如：chatting on line is also helpful for our language study．/They say making friends on line is a waste of time，which should be spent more meaningfully/Only in this way can making online friends be valuable to us．熟练正确的使用这些句型能体现考生的水平，也会给自己的文章加分．
 Besides，chatting on line is also helpful for our language study．（高分句型一）
They say making friends on line is a waste of time，which should be spent more meaningfully on study．（高分句型二）
Only in this way can making online friends be valuable to us．（高分句型三）

解答 Should students make friends on line？People have different opinions on this．Some students say yes．They express their reasons as follows．Firstly，the Internet can help them make various friends．Secondly，they can express their feelings and thoughts freely．Besides，chatting on line is also helpful for our language study．（高分句型一）
      However，other students have the opposite view．They have their own reasons．They say making friends on line is a waste of time，which should be spent more meaningfully on study．（高分句型二） In addition，some students get cheated on line．
      In my opinion，students should place their study，health and safety before other things．As for friendship，we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us．From my point of view，making online friends is not a bad thing if we're careful enough．Anyway，Internet widens our eyes and enriches our knowledge．However，we shouldn't spend too much time on it and sometimes be careful with the people we chat with．Only in this way can making online friends be valuable to us．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．