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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As is often the case,when people are attending meetings,having meals or waiting for buses,you can always find it addicted to their phones,completely ignore others.

This is really a common phenomenon in our life.The reason is because smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games but keep in touch with friends through QQ and Wechat.However,too many exposure to phones is bad for people in term of health.Moreover,people who were engaged in phones fail to communicate well those around them.

As far as I'm concerned,people should wise make use of their phones to help with their work and study. Meanwhile,they should be care more about their family members and friends rather than mobile phones.

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【解析】试题分析：本文介绍了手机的诸多功能使得人们现在越来越依赖它。

1.考查代词。此处意思是说你可以发现他们沉溺于手机，不能用it来指代，他们是人，故用them，宾格代词。

2.考查非谓语动词。逗号隔开没有连接词，故此部分不能做句子，ignore要用非谓语形式，逻辑主语是people，和ignore之间是主动关系，故用现在分词，ignoring。

3.考查连词。The reason is that是固定句型：原因是……；The reason is because是病句：原因是因为，是病句，故应把because改为that。

4.考查连词。此处是并列关系，说明手机的功能，故用and。

5.考查代词。Exposure是不可数名词，用much修饰，不用many。

6.考查名词单复数。in terms of固定搭配，就……而言。

7.考查时态。本文介绍的是手机，用一般现在时描述，故此处也用一般现在时，ｗｅｒｅ改为ａｒｅ。

８.考查介词。此处为固定搭配，ｃｏｍｍｕｎｉｃａｔｅ　ｗｉｔｈ　ｓｂ和某人交流，少了介词ｗｉｔｈ，加上。

９.考查副词。此处为副词修饰动词，故改为ｗｉｓｅｌｙ。

１０.考查语态。此处为主动语态，他们关心家人是主动的，故去掉ｂｅ。