分析 本文属于半开放式作文同时也是议论文,要求学生就"什么是幸福?"展开讨论.应该使用第三人称和一般现在时为主的时态.要点:1.有人说,幸福是获取(锦衣美食,家人朋友的呵护,…)2.有人说,幸福是给予(帮助别人,奉献社会,…) 3.我认为…开始在不同的观点后可以适当添加个人观点,如:幸福就是做好自己的本职工作,做一个对社会和家庭有益的人.建议文章分成三部分,重点在最后一部分展开详细叙述.
亮点部分 本篇范文结构完整,层次分明.文章涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点,在每一个要点中都有非常好的添加,全文没有中国式英语句式,体现了很好的驾驭英语的能力.学生对于写作技巧的运用较好,文章中多次使用了高级句式,如定语从句和动名词作表语:To some people,happiness is having things that make life comfortable and pleasurable,such as beautiful clothes,yummy food and trendy gadgets.Happiness is being surrounded by family and friends,being loved and cared for and appreciated by others.让步状语从句They always think of how to help others and how to contribute to society,no matter how insignificant they are and how little they can do.等等.
解答 Recently,different surveys as to what happiness is have been conducted on different media,which has raised wide public concern.(高级句式)What is happiness?Different people have different ideas.
Recently,different surveys as to what happiness is have been conducted on different media,which has raised wide public concern.(高级句式)What is happiness?Different people have different ideas.
To some people,happiness is having things that make life comfortable and pleasurable,such as beautiful clothes,yummy food and trendy gadgets.(高级句式)Happiness is being surrounded by family and friends,being loved and cared for and appreciated by others.(高级句式)
To some people,happiness means giving.They always think of how to help others and how to contribute to society,no matter how insignificant they are and how little they can do.(高级句式)They are willing to do everything they can to free others from trouble.
To me,the secret to happiness is simple.I'm happy when I'm with my family,talking about what happened at school,helping with housework or simply sitting with them watching tv for a while.I'm happy if I accomplish something,anything,answering a question correctly in class,handing in my project by the deadline or helping a classmate with a math problem.(高级句式)To me,happiness is a choice,an attitude.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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