China Daily现就“Health and Wealth, Which Is More Important”在读者中展开讨论，假设你是王磊，你向报社投稿，请依据下列要点写一篇短文，词数110左右，可适当添加细节。首句已给出，不计入总字数。
1．财富比健康重要，富人受人尊重，而穷人受人歧视。
2．健康胜于财富，健康的人才能享受生活。
3．你自己的看法。
Health and Wealth, Which Is More Important
Some people hold that wealth is more important than health．
Some people hold that wealth is more important than health. They think that a wealthy person will be respected in this world, while a poor person will be looked down upon by others. Therefore, a person who tries all means to make money will be considered (to be) a hero no matter whether he is in good or poor health.
However ,the majority of people believe that health is more important than wealth . For example, a healthy scientist can achieve more success in his scientific research .Only if a person enjoys good health ,can he really enjoy his life.
In my opinion, health is more important than wealth .Good health can bring us success as well as real happiness . So ,health is the most important thing that one has to treasure in this world.
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试题分析：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。而且我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。这就要求平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】They think that a wealthy person will be respected in this world, while a poor person will be looked down upon by others. 这句话里面有宾语从句，也能正确使用连词while，还有Only if a person enjoys good health ,can he really enjoy his life.这是一个倒装句
考点：考查提纲类书面表达
科目：高中英语 来源：2012年北师大版高中英语选修一Unit13练习卷（解析版） 题型：阅读理解
The following are three advertisements from different newspapers. Read them carefully and answer the following questions.
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(China Daily, March 3, 2005) The biggest shopping center will open on March 8. Everybody with today’s China Daily will get a small present that day. You are welcome. Telephone: 38990688; Address: No.6 Xidan Road. |
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(ENGLSIH NEWSPAPER. March 19) English Newspaper needs a foreign editor. He or she must have worked in China for more than 2 years. British nationality is necessary. The salary is $ 100,000 a year. The term is 3 years. In ten days this piece of advertisement will be not useful. Telephone: 3890666; Address: No. 6 Xinling Road. |
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(CHINA FOOTBALL, September 25, 2005) Shanghai Shenhua Team-----Dalian Shide Team TIME: September 25, Sunday (15: 30) PLACE: Hongkou Stadium TICKET PRICE: RMB 25 yuan (for adults); RMB 15 yuan (for students) NAME: China Football Super League COACHES: Farinha & Valeri Nepomniatchi |
1.If the customer has a China Daily of March 3, 2005, he will get a small present _____.
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A．every day |
B．from China Dail |
C．on March 8, 2005 |
D．on March 3, 2005 |
2.If a British editor has worked in China for 3 years and comes to the English Newspaper office to ask for the job in April, he will _____ .
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A．get the job |
B．not get the job |
C．be a good editor |
D．be not useful |
3.When and where will the football match be held?
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A．In Hongkou Stadium on September 25. |
B．In Hongkou Stadium on September 19. |
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C．In Shanghai Shenhua on September 25. |
D．In Dalian Shide on September 19. |
4.If three adults and six students want to watch the match, the tickets will cost RMB __ yuan.
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A．165 |
B．135 |
C．195 |
D．225 |
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