Question

假如你是李华, Jane 是美国人。在她暑假来中国游玩时你们相识,并成为好朋友。Jane回国后,你很想念她,于是给她写了一封信,并且和她谈了你对高一新生活的感受。信头信尾均已给出；词数100左右。
Dear Jane,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Jane,
How’s everything going? I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you. I miss you very much after you left China and thus I am writing this letter to tell you something about me. I entered senior high school in September. The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges. My teachers and classmates are all very kind. I have decided to try my best to learn a lot from them. Of course, I will also do more exercise to keep fit.
Give my best regards to your parents and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

解析试题分析：本文是篇材料作文, 内容是Jane 是美国人。在她暑假来中国游玩时你们相识,并成为好朋友。Jane回国后,你很想念她,于是给她写了一封信,并且和她谈了你对高一新生活的感受。时态要用一般现在时。人称以第一人称为主。字数要求100词左右。所以要求根据个人理解说明原因和保护视力的措施。还应该注意使用较高级的词汇和句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如full of challenges，keep fit，look forward to，还运用了宾语从句； 非谓语作状语等等。并注意了句子变化和句子之间的衔接如：and thus，Of course等等。
考点：提纲作文。