Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校上周五举办了一次消防演习。请根据以下四幅图的顺序写一篇英语周记，记录这次演习的全过程。

注意：1．词数不少于60；

2．开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3．提示词：消防演习 a fire drill，报警器 fire alarm，逃生路线 evacuation route

Last Friday, we practised a fire drill in the school.

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Answer 1

【答案】Possible version 1:

Last Friday, we practised a fire drill in the school. In the morning, we were having a class when suddenly some black smoke went into the classroom. At the same time, the fire alarm went off. So we quickly followed the evacuation route and went downstairs. Everyone bent down and used a towel to cover the noses and mouths. We went out of the teaching building in a short time. During that time, a fireman was counting time with his watch. It took us three minutes to get to the playground! The fireman was impressed by our quick action and praised us.

Possible version 2:

Last Friday, we practised a fire drill in the school. In the morning, we were in the middle of the English class when heavy smoke began floating into the classroom from the hallway. The fire alarm went off and we quickly got out of our classroom and followed the evacuation route. Everyone hurried downstairs to the playground, bending down and covering the noses and mouths with towels. At the same time, a fireman was timing us with his watch. When we got to the playground safe, he told us we had made it within 3 minutes. He praised us for our quick reactions. This fire drill helped us know a minute would make all the difference in an emergency.

【解析】

这是一篇图画类作文。

第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校上周五举办了一次消防演习。请根据以下四幅图的顺序写一篇英语周记，记录这次演习的全过程。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：at the same time(同时)；fire alarm (报警器)；a fire drill (消防演习)；evacuation route (逃生路线)；teaching building(教学楼)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。