Question

19．请简要描述下面图片的内容，并谈谈你的看法．

（参考词汇：雾霾haze，雾霾天气 haze weather ）

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
However，if we just copmlain without taking any steps，which will make no sense except being poisoned by the smog contiually．然而，如果我们只是一味的抱怨而不采取措施，那将毫无意义而且我们还会被雾霾毒害．
高分句型二：
Only when we shift our attention from cursing irritatedly to seeking its solutions can what troubles us be tackled．只有当我们停止诅咒抱怨，转而将精力放在寻求解决办法的时候，那些困扰我们的问题才能被解决．
句型一 ①if we just copmlain without taking any steps该句是一个if引导的条件状语从句
            ②which will make no sense except being poisoned by the smog contiually．该句是一个由which充当引导词，替代前面整句话内容，且在句中充当主语的非限制性定语从句
句型二 Only when we shift our attention…can what troubles us be tackled 该句使用了部分倒装句，此处是当only位于句首且修饰状语从句的时候，主语要使用部分倒装，将主语同谓语部分的助动词进行位置的交换

解答 With one person thinking to himself how smelly the air is and the other contemplating  what we can actually do to solve it，as it depicted in the picture，the two persons are reacting in completely different ways to the haze weather，which has almsot suffocated citizens from the stricken areas．（提出论点）
      As for which person is acting significantly，the answer is apparantly evident．When facing the terribly polluted weather，it isn't how we feel but what we can do that actually matters．As the saying goes，"Actions speak louder than words"．Take immediate actions and we may bear the hope that the weather will no longer be worsening and one day in the future our offsprings can breathe in fresh air without any potential risk．However，if we just copmlain without taking any steps，which will make no sense except being poisoned by the smog contiually．（高分句型一）
     The message implied here is extremely clear that thinking how to resolve a problem and then acting without any hesitaion is of vital importance when encountering any problems like setbacks and challenges in our life．Only when we shift our attention from cursing irritatedly to seeking its solutions can what troubles us be tackled．（高分句型二）（提出解决办法）

点评 该书面表达是一篇议论文，写作时要求对某现象或观点进行评述，一定要注意用足够的论据来分层次论证自己的观点，同时应注意与主题句相呼应．