Question

在学校，对于我们学生来说，与老师建立良好的关系非常重要。请就“师生关系”这一主题用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，谈谈你的看法，内容包括：

1. 良好的师生关系的重要性；

2. 怎样培养良好的师生关系。

注意：可适当发展，以使行文连贯。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Good relationships between our teachers and us play an important part in our study and life. Only with good relationships can our teachers achieve the desired teaching effect, and can we do well in our studies.

This ideal relationship depends on mutual effort. On the one hand, we should respect our teachers and their efforts paid to us. We should be ready to follow their practical advice. On the other hand, our teachers should not only be kind, friendly and patient to us,but also treat each student fairly and equally. They must be responsible for their teaching and ready to help us when we are in trouble. In a word, if teachers and we are willing to do their best, the relationship between us will be quite beneficial.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于半开放性作文。话题为“师生关系”.本文的基本时态为一般现在时，人称可以使用第三人称。要点为：1. 良好的师生关系的重要性；2. 怎样培养良好的师生关系。考生一定要有适当的扩充，可以从学生的个人发展方面说明良好师生关系的重要性。在如何培养方面，可以从责任心等方面展开说明。

【亮点说明】本文的亮点主要在两方面：1.连接词的运用，In a word, On the other hand, 和On the one hand以及高级句式，如第一段里的only的倒装句，Only with good relationship can our teacher achieve the designed teaching effect。

考点：考察半开放性作文