Question

【题目】假如你是张明，你的好朋友Jim面对即将到来的考试感到焦虑不已，晚上睡眠不好，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写信向你求助。请根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封信。

1.表示理解；

2.制定复习计划，树立信心；

3.坚持锻炼身体；睡前喝点牛奶,保持好的睡眠

4....

注意：1. 词数100字左右； 2.可适当增加细节，已使行文连贯

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I am sorry to hear that you feel so nervous before the coming exam that you can’t sleep well at night. It affects your life and study greatly. I can understand your feelings. Don’t worry and I’m writing to give you some suggestions.

First, it’s necessary to make careful plans before exams to master what you have learned completely. It will help you build up your confidence. Second, you’d better do proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic. Last, don’t stay up late studying. Drinking a glass of milk before you go to bed can improve your sleep. It is very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day.

I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of exams and perform well in them.

Yours

Zhangming

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假如你是张明，你的好朋友Jim面对即将到来的考试感到焦虑不已，晚上睡眠不好，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写信向你求助。请根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封信。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用用一般现在时来写。要点：1.表示理解；2.制定复习计划，树立信心；3.坚持锻炼身体；睡前喝点牛奶,保持好的睡眠4....这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: build up增强，stay up late睡得很晚。还使用了定语从句Second, you’d better do proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic.和宾语从句I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of exams and perform well in them.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。