Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Linda，

How is everything going with you?I’ve returned to Shanghai，tiredly but happy．I can’t thank you enough for all the kindness you offered during my stay in New Zealand.

When I first got to there．I found hard to use English properly．It was you who always helped me with patience．Now I have made such a great progress that I can speak English more fluent. I even have a large vocabulary than before．I am not scared of English any more.

When I am homesick．you kept me company，chatting，playing games or showed me around the scenic spots．You made me felt as if I were one of your family members．There are so much wonderful memories fresh in my mind．

In addition，please remember me to your parents．

Best wishes，

Yours，

Yu Lei

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】tiredly → tired

【2】there前的to去掉

【3】hard前加it

【4】great前的a去掉

【5】fluent → fluently

【6】large → larger

【7】am → was

【8】showed→ showing

【9】felt→ feel

【10】much → many

【解析】

【1】根据下文的and happy应用tired与happy并列。故tiredly → tired。

【2】根据there是副词，故there前的to去掉。

【3】根据句型find it hard to do sth发现做某事困难。故hard前加it。

【4】progress是不可数名词。故great前的a去掉。

【5】根据前文的speak判断应用副词修饰。故fluent → fluently。

【6】根据下文的than before可知应用比较级，故large → larger。

【7】根据该句的语境，应用一般过去时。故am → was。

【8】根据chatting，playing和showing是并列方式状语。故showed→ showing。

【9】根据make后用省去to的不定式做宾补。故felt→ feel。

【10】根据memories判断应用many修饰。故much → many。