Question

阅读下面一则广告，按照要求完成写作任务。
ETL International English Summer Camp
Volunteer Wanted
EIL was founded in Britain in 1936 with the fundamental aim of international understanding“Learn to live together by living together”.
Requirements: Over 16; good knowledge of English; outgoing; working well with children between 7-12
Activities: Language study, outdoor recreation and travel
Campers： Students from different countries
Camp site：Mount Wuyi, Fujian
Time: July 26-August 9
Application deadline： July 15, 2012
If interested, please e-mail to info@eiuk.org
假设你是李华，这则广告引起了你的兴趣，请用英文写一封自荐信。
要点如下：
1.对夏令营主题的理解；2.根据招聘要求自我介绍；3.参加夏令营的目的。
注意：1.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.词数120左右。
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua from Fujian.                                           
                                                                
                                                                
I am looking forward to your early reply.                
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua from Fujian, When I was reading the advertisement, the aim of this activity impressed me greatly. I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.
As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12. I think it is a kind of win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care of the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.
 I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

解析试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。假设你是李华，这则广告引起了你的兴趣，请用英文写一封自荐信。要点如下：1.对夏令营主题的理解；2.根据招聘要求自我介绍；3.参加夏令营的目的。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮点说明】I think it is a kind of win-win activity.这里含有一个宾语从句。
考点：话题类书面表达