Question

假如你是李华，学校组织了一项“有烦恼向谁说”的调查活动。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信，反映相关的情况。
[写作内容]
请根据以下信息，介绍调查结果（如图所示）以及持相应想法的理由。

[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容（不含已给句子）。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

Answer 1

不唯一
One possible version:
Dear Editor,
Recently we have carried out a survey—To whom do you go when in trouble? 61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble. The reason for it is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other. 22% choose teachers and parents to talk to for the reason that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experiences. However, there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all. They say that their troubles are none of others’ business and some of them find it hard to get along with others.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

试题分析：这是一篇书信类作文，这道题目有个特点就是要结合已给出的图表，所以首先必须看懂图表，并且要用第一人称来写。写信时不能只是生硬的写出调查结果，一定要阐明持相应想法的理由。需要注意不要偏离文章中心，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容（不含已给句子）。
点评：本文属于书信类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。