Question

13．第一节 短文改错
假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    Last week，Wang Peng sees none of his customers would eat in his restaurant as usual．From his opinion，however，nothing could be better than his dishes．Out of curiosity，following one of his best friend into Yong Hui's newly opened restaurant，he was amazed at the menu there．In order to win his customers back，he went to the library．In the library he was surprised to found that his restaurant served far too many fat and Yong Hui's far too little．
    Even though his customers might get thin after eat Yong Hui's food，but they were not eating enough energy-giving food to keep fit．They would become tired very quick．
    Wang Peng felt hopeful when she drove back home．Perhaps with discount and a new sign he could win his customers back．

Answer 1

分析 上周王鹏发现他的餐馆的顾客不如以前多了，原来是都去了新开的一家餐馆，王鹏到图书馆通过查阅资料发现，原来他的餐馆的饭菜脂肪含量比较高，但是新开的餐馆尽管饭菜脂肪含量低，但是长期食用并不能给人提供足够的能量，这就使王鹏有信心赢回他的顾客了．

解答 Last week，Wang Peng sees none of his customers would eat in his restaurant as usual．From his opinion，however，nothing could be better than his dishes．Out of curiosity，following one of his best friend into Yong Hui's newly opened restaurant，he was amazed at the menu there．In order to win his customers back，he went to the library．In the library he was surprised to found that his restaurant served far too many fat and Yong Hui's far too little．
Even though his customers might get thin after eat Yong Hui's food，but they were not eating enough energy-giving food to keep fit．They would become tired very quick．
Wang Peng felt hopeful when shedrove back home．Perhaps with∧discount and a new sign he could win his customers back．
详解：
1．sees改为saw；考查动词的时态，本文叙述过去的事情，要用一般过去式．
2．from改为in；考查固定搭配，in one's opinion 是固定短语，意为"在某人看来"．
3．friend改为friends；考查名词，one of 后面要跟名词的复数形式．
4．found改为find；考查动词不定式，不定式符号to 后面要跟动词原形．
5．many改为much；考查近义词辨析，many修饰可数名词复数形式，much修饰不可数名词，fat意为"脂肪"，不可数，故用much修饰．
6．eat改为eating；考查非谓语动词，介词after后面要跟动名词形式．
7．去掉but；考查连词，Even though引导让步状语从句时不能与but连用，故把but去掉．
8．quick改为quickly；考查副词，此处用副词作状语修饰整个句子．
9．she改为he；考查人称代词，此处人称代词指代Wang Peng，结合上文可知应该用he．
10．with后面加a；考查冠词，discount意为"折扣"是可数的，故前面加a表示泛指．

点评 在短文改错当中，首先要从整体掌握短文大意，结合上下文语境并充分运用平时掌握的基础知识，习惯用法，短语搭配等对短文进行分析，以便找出文中的错误加以修改．