Question

2．假如你是大学一年级新生李华．开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议．请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信．
1．对英语学习的认识；
2．自己目前的英语水平；
3．自己英语学习存在的主要问题；
4．对英语教学的两点建议．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．信的开头和结尾已给出．
Dear Ms Li，
I'm very happy to have you asour English teacher．As the world is becoming a global village，English isgetting more and more important，so mastering English means we can see theworld through a new window．
My English is just OK and the two mainproblems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，andthat I often feel nervous when speaking English．I really hope that youcan give me good advice on how to memorize new words．Another suggestion is togive us more chances to practice speaking．I believe we can make much progressin English with your help．．
Thank you!
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料，写一封信给英语老师，告知自己的英语学习情况．要点包括：对英语学习的认识；自己目前的英语水平；自己英语学习存在的主要问题，对英语教学的两点建议．写作时以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称和第三人称为主．重要短语：learn words by heart （用心背单词），feel nervous （觉得紧张），give sb good advice on （给某人关于…的建议），chances to do sth （做某事的机会），make much progress （取得很大进展），memorize new words （记忆新单词）．

解答 Dear Ms Li，
      I'm very happy to have you as our Englishteacher．As the world is becoming a global village，English is getting more andmore important，so mastering English means we can see the world through a newwindow．【高分句型】（对英语学习的认识）
      My English is just OK （自己目前的英语水平） and the two main problemsin my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，and that Ioften feel nervous when speaking English．【高分句型】（自己英语学习存在的问题）I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize newwords．Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking．Ibelieve we can make much progress in English with your help．（对英语学习的建议）
                                                    Thank you!

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．