Question

假如你是新华中学的学生李华，偶然看到在你市求学的美国学生Tom在网上发帖，要大家给他推荐一本学习汉语的书。你手头正好有一本合适的书可以借给他。请你给他发一封电子邮件，要点如下：

1．说明写信原因；

2．描述书的情况；

3．约定见面时间和地点。

注意：

1.词数：120 -150；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

I'm Ii Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School._______________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.

Yours

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Tom,

I’m Li Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School. The other day, I learned quite by chance that you were in need of a book to help you improve your Chinese. I happen to have one, which I think might help you.

The book, entitled New Practical Chinese, is intended for beginners at your level. Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life, it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs. Edited by three language experts, it has been popular with the readers ever since it came out two years ago.

If it is convenient to you, let’s meet at 3 pm. this Sunday at the entrance to the People’s Park, where I can give you the book face to face. If not, try to find another time that is suitable for both of us.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是书信类作文，要求用英语给汤姆发一封电子邮，给他推荐一本学习汉语的书。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但不是很具体，考生要把要点全交代，不能有遗漏。而且要拓展内容，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。因为是书信，所以本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组： The other day“几天前”, by chance“偶然”. be intended for “意图是”。还有一个很大的特点，这篇文章的句型多变，也适当应用了高中所学的重点语法知识： I happen to have one, which I think might help you.这句话用了定语从句， The book, entitled New Practical Chinese, is intended for beginners at your level. 这句话用来了过去分词做定语，Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life, it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs. 这句话用了定语从句和倒装句，Edited by three language experts, it has been popular with the readers ever since it came out two years ago. 这句话用了过去分词做状语， If it is convenient to you, let’s meet at 3 pm. this Sunday at the entrance to the People’s Park, where I can give you the book face to face.这句话用了定语从句， If not, try to find another time that is suitable for both of us.

这句话用了省略句。

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