Question

 

我最喜欢的老师

作为一名中学生，你遇到过许多好的老师，你最喜欢的老师是谁？请以My favorite teacher为题，写一篇短文。题目和开头已为你写好。

My favorite teacher

In my high school, I have many good teachers, but my English teacher, Mr. Liu, who is about forty yours old, is the one I particularly like and respect.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

My favorite teacher

In my high school, I have many good teachers, but my English teacher, Mr. Liu, who is about forty yours old, is the one I particularly like and respect.

He is kind but very strict and has a very special way of teaching. At the beginning of every class, he always tells us some interesting English stories to attract our attention and to make us interested in English. He is so humorous and experienced in teaching that he can make his lessons lively and interesting. When the bell rings to dismiss the class I always feel a bit sorry.

Mr. Liu teaches us how to write in simple, clear and correct English and to make ourselves understood to English speaking people. He takes a personal interest in each of us and has made a deep impression on us all.

Since Mr. Liu began to teach me English I have made rapid progress. I respect him and decide to choose teaching as my career.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇开放式作文。它的写作思路与汉语作文非常相似。首先要明确主题，然后根据主题搭建文章的主体结构，即写作提纲。提纲要突出主题，有层次，先写什么，后写什么要有安排。

本文要求以“我最喜欢的老师”为题写一篇文章，属一篇写人的记叙文。写的对象是老师，那么老师受学生喜欢一般来说源于两个方面。一、人品、个性、人格魅力，二、教学方面。大方向确定好以后，可以回忆一些描写人物的词句，然后进行组织。

写作时要注意文章的时态，如果写现在的老师 ，则用现在的各种时态，写曾经的老师则要用过去的各种时态。

由于自由度较大，写作时一定要注意紧紧围绕主题。

【亮点说明】

1、文章语言简洁清楚，表达时还又不泛一些较为精彩的句型，如：He is so humorous and experienced in teaching that he can make his lessons lively and interesting.此处的so… that…句型用得恰到好处。

2、情感色彩鲜明。When the bell rings to dismiss the class I always feel a bit sorry.此句一看就知作者是多么地喜欢这个老师。

3、最后一段写了这位老师对我的影响大到我决定将来也做老师，更可看出这篇文章紧紧围绕主题。

考点：开放性作文