Question

10．假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华．在高考前剩下的日子里，你的朋友Peter想了解你的计划，请你给他写一封回信．信的内容包括：
1．你的计划和愿望是什么？
2．你打算如何实现你的愿望．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；
3．短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息．
Dear Peter，
I am more than glad to hear from you．In your last letter you asked me about my plans in the coming months and I'd like to tell you something about it．
As you know，the biggest event for us is College Entrance Examinations，for which all the senior students are sparing no efforts to make preparations．（高分句型一）Thus，I must make good use of the rest valuable days to strengthen my ability to face it．So I hope I can try my best in the exams and be admitted to a key university．In addition，I am also eager to be healthy both physically and mentally．Therefore，doing regular reading and exercise is necessary for me in my spare time．（高分句型二）
All in all，I firmly believe that I'll have a busy but meaningful life this year．（高分句型三）What about you？Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华．在高考前剩下的日子里，你的朋友Peter想了解你的计划，请你给他写一封回信．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：你的计划和愿望是什么？你打算如何实现你的愿望．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：more than非常；As you know众所周知；Thus因此；make good use of充分利用；In addition另外；Therefore因此；All in all总之；
As you know，the biggest event for us is College Entrance Examinations，for which all the senior students are sparing no efforts to make preparations．（高分句型一）
Therefore，doing regular reading and exercise is necessary for me in my spare time．（高分句型二）
All in all，I firmly believe that I'll have a busy but meaningful life this year．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       I am more than glad to hear from you．In your last letter you asked me about my plans in the coming months and I'd like to tell you something about it．
       As you know，the biggest event for us is College Entrance Examinations，for which all the senior students are sparing no efforts to make preparations．（高分句型一）Thus，I must make good use of the rest valuable days to strengthen my ability to face it．So I hope I can try my best in the exams and be admitted to a key university．In addition，I am also eager to be healthy both physically and mentally．Therefore，doing regular reading and exercise is necessary for me in my spare time．（高分句型二）
       All in all，I firmly believe that I'll have a busy but meaningful life this year．（高分句型三）What about you？Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．