Question

9．假定你是大学一年级新生李华．开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望你了解每们同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议．请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信．
要点：1．对英语学习的认识；
2．自己目前的英语水平；
3．自己在英语学习中存在的主要问题；
4．对英语教学的两点建议．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）．
Dear Mr．Li，
I'm very happy to have you as our English teacher．
                                                                                  
Thank you!
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是应用文中常见的书信，考生对于这种题材是非常熟悉的，文章的要点基本上已经给出来了，考生只需要做适当的发挥即可，不要啰嗦．在写作的时候要注意使用合适的连接词和高级词汇，特别要注意连接词的使用，在列举要点时，使用合适的连接词能让文章更有条理．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：a global village地球村；more and more越来越；learn sth by heart牢记；make much progress 取得进步；with your help在你的帮助之下；
As the world is becoming a global village，English is getting more and more important，（高分句型一）
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，and that I often feel nervous when speaking English．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Ms Li，
      I am very happy to have you as our English teacher．As the world is becoming a global village，English is getting more and more important，（高分句型一）So mastering English means we can see the world through a new window．
      My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，and that I often feel nervous when speaking English．（高分句型二）I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words．Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking．I believe we can make much progress in English with your help．
      Thank you!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours truly，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．